What an amazing poem, Faye! I am blown away by how genuinely erotic and insightful it is. I'm going to to restack it and I want to quote you, but I could honestly pick any part of it, yet I've chosen this for reasons known only to Erato and the Muses. Well done!
"a butterfly dances / on soft pink daisies / lips part / breath releases shoulders / cracks open back of heart / thick and dark and forgotten / a serpent awakens / she / uncoiling / summons guttural sounding / tongue travels strange trajectories.
without words / i am remembering / what love means."
What strikes me is the deep raw yearning, but it is balanced by a contentment in the present. Somehow it makes me want to just sit and soak it in. Beautifully done.
What an amazing poem, Faye! I am blown away by how genuinely erotic and insightful it is. I'm going to to restack it and I want to quote you, but I could honestly pick any part of it, yet I've chosen this for reasons known only to Erato and the Muses. Well done!
"a butterfly dances / on soft pink daisies / lips part / breath releases shoulders / cracks open back of heart / thick and dark and forgotten / a serpent awakens / she / uncoiling / summons guttural sounding / tongue travels strange trajectories.
without words / i am remembering / what love means."
Martin, thank you for your reading and reflection! I am grateful and flattered that you've shared... and trust in Erato and the Muses' choice :)
This is really profound. I'm in the dark and slippery, too.
thank you Liana. always grateful to share experience with you 🖤
Beautiful
thank you Adrian
This poem.... made sweat. It could easily become an opening scene of a great movie
thank you Rolando for reading and commenting. the opening of a movie... what an idea that is to toy with, what an idea indeed
I'm only following your ideas 😁
Wow
Thank you
<3 thank you for reading Morgan
What strikes me is the deep raw yearning, but it is balanced by a contentment in the present. Somehow it makes me want to just sit and soak it in. Beautifully done.