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very rich, like a heavy cream, movement, images. very good.

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thank you Wes. I like that image, a heavy cream. Making fresh whipped cream has always been my favorite part of any holiday. And lately I've adopted the ritual of adding a dollop to my coffee.

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me too, cream everyday.

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Absolutely stunning!! I bow before you and your gifts 🤍

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Thank you, my friend!! 💛🌹 I bow right back. My heart is smiling

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Beautiful. Thank you for sharing it 🩶 by the way, would you by any chance be interested in joining the Thorny Thursday? It’s a weekly event for love and romance writing on Substack.

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Thank you, Kathrine 🌹 And oooh yes I am intrigued! can you tell me more about Thorny Thursday? Feel free to DM me

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SO GOOD!! This feels like a flagship poem for you.

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Thank you Mike! Now that you say it, I feel that, too. This one definitely illustrates that idea of constantly asking/contemplating/writhing around the same question we were talking about

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💯

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Wow this is incredible!

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Thank you Jennae! 💛💛💛

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